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Tiltshift - Forbidden City by SaTaNiA Tiltshift - Forbidden City by SaTaNiA
Hey there !

Here's my first try to photography and to the TiltShift method !
First of all it's a panorama of 4 photos that's why you may seen some ghost shapes or strange things :)
I think this POV was great to try a tiltshift :)

it's also our first photo on deviantART from our trip to China :la:
More are on the way :la:

So please, don't hesitate to critique or give me some advices as i'm a total newbie in this photography world (and even on the tiltshift method :p)

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You say you're new to this whole "tilt and shift" effect? I say, nonsense! If you really are new, then this must be the best example of beginner's luck I've seen so far. However, if you are a newbie and wish to improve in a few general areas, here's my :iconfireplz: hot tip. If you look closely to the left of the image, you'll note that one of the bollards or whatever is in focus as well as out. This may throw off the balance of the effect just slightly, as it also appears that way on the right. You've already gotten the subject right, but some necessary details are missing. But still, you've done pretty well. Wanna now why? Because I didn't see the errors before you asked us to critique. I only saw perfection. Keep it up! ;)
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My-Life-Without-Hair Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Jolie utilisation de la technique
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mushroom-pride Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) this is lovely.
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :hug:
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mauromago Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Nice, but.... :-)
I like tiltshift and I tried it many time (not ever with good result:-( ), so my general consideration.
Tiltshift can have good effect when the shot is more near possible to natural eyes look. Too short focal (some time too long too) or wide panoramas reduce the effect, IMHO obviously :D.
And about this one especially the near fiend is not enough out-of-focus.
But is a good shot to work on it.
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for those advice :hug:
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wingsofdragons Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Stunning shot....thanks for sharing
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :hug:
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:iconwingsofdragons:
wingsofdragons Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure :hug:
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ArtBIT Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha, awesome! :)
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot bro :hug:
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fraterchaos Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very cool!
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot dude :hug:
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nartim Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
The focus on this picture is fantastic
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :hug:
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Tonythunder Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
this looks pretty amazing dude
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iLantiis Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow. This looks amazing! Newbie you say? No one can tell, no one can tell :heart:
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:blush: Thanks a lot hunny :hug:
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ZeldaDreams Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:boogie:
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ransomax Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Overall it is a great photo. It has some strange other world type feel or something not real.
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was what I was looking for :hug:
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leomon32 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
J'ai toujours aimé les tiltshift, je trouve ça marrant, tu as utilisé ta caméra ou c'est avec photoshop ? Parce qu'il y a pas mal de méthodes pour en faire.
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*plutot pas mal
Sa serai mieux si je finissai mes phrases :p
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leomon32 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
lol, ça m'arrive souvent sur Facebook xP
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha merci a photoshop !
Le prix des objo Tiltshift est juste bien loin de la limite raisonnable pour un amateur comme moi :)
CS6 a une fonction embarqué de tiltshift qui marche plutot pas :)
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leomon32 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh sur CS6, il faut utiliser le mode masque avec une dégradé rond puis inversé et faire le flou de l'objectif, le résultat est sympa et très paramètrable.
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ouep c'est ca :)
Mais maintenant tu a un plugin de base qui le fait tres bien et parametrable :)
Sa evite de faire les masques etc ;)
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leomon32 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh, faudrait que j'essai
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f-ix Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
You'll laugh but I thought this was an MB3D fractal from the thumbnail! :rofl:

Great shot, anyway! Everything looks as if it were miniature-sized thanks to the tilt-shift. :D
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rofl:
Thanks a lot :hug:
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Mark-Rezyka Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Excellent work. Bravo.
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SaTaNiA Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :hug:
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